The Louder Than Words team, in partnership with Northern Gravy, Louder Than War and Omnibus Pressare delighted to announce the winners of our 2025 Wilko Johnson Writing Award. The award celebrates the very best in music related writing from new and aspiring writers and we’re delighted to have recieved such high quality entries. Rounds of applause for all who entered – and special conratulations to our 3 winners: #1 Erin Braithwaite; #2 Han Lake and #3 Ceinwen Haydon.
Wilko 2024
Erin Braithwaite
The Wilko Johnson Writing Award 2024
The Question
Rock star Frank Zappa once said “Rock journalism is people who can’t write, interviewing people who can’t talk, for people who can’t read.”
Bearing in mind he named his children things like Moon Unit and Dweezil – and in an age of Tik Toks and 280-character Tweets – was Frank right… or does the music scene still need critics to make sense of the noise?
1st Place winner: Erin Braithwaite
Different Reasons
It’s December 2011. I am in my dad’s car on a journey that will end at the doors of Houghton House, a rehab facility in Johannesburg, South Africa. The car holds four people. The return trip will hold three.
The radio is on. I can see the white of my parents’ knuckles as they hold tight to one another over the handbrake. My sister is staring out of her window as I stare out of mine, like bookends to the tension. I’m holding a silent vigil with the radio presenter. Willing him to announce that “Shake It Out” by Florence and the Machine is next on his playlist.
(I am now thirteen years of therapy richer, so it’s hard to picture twenty-year-old me, absolutely desperate for this song to play now, at this moment. So that I could dedicate it to my mother in the front seat. So that I could manage to articulate a modicum of the emotion that was damming against the back of my teeth.)
We creep closer to our destination and my desperation grows. Throw me a bone here, Mr DJ. If that song doesn’t play in the next ten minutes I will never be able to tell my mother that this song is this moment. Written by an angel (because, let’s face it, Florence Welch is surely proof of the concept), written for Us.
The DJ does not cooperate. We walk into the rehab in silence. Intake forms. Explanations of visiting protocol, strong encouragement for us to attend the family sessions weekly (which, thank Florence Welch, we did). Then, the hugs goodbye. The see-you-soons. You-can-do-this; really a please-please-do-this.
And we get back into the car. I’m in the front seat now. My dad’s jaw is working. My sister is alone now in the back. And, as we reach the motorway, “Shake It Out” by Florence and the Machine.
I break open. I cry the whole way home, a lot longer than the 3.25 minute radio edit. Still unable to speak about what I’m feeling, but that song has broken the dam.
(Old habits die hard and my wall is still in place, I’m fighting a welling up against memory as I write this, but it’s lower now. I can stand on my tip-toes and peer over the top.)
I couldn’t care about what critics had to say about Florence’s anthem. Even if the song had zero critical acclaim, nothing would change the fact that it was able to facilitate the undoing of a lifetime of pain, and represent, for me at least, a divine moment of healing for my family.
A critic can’t dissect the intricacies that exist between a person and their favourite song. How do you critique emotion?
Dave Grohl said: “That’s one of the great things about music. You can sing a song to 85,000 people and they’ll sing it back for 85,000 different reasons.”
The girl in that car in Johannesburg knew this, and I know it too.
2nd Place winner: Han Lake
Since childhood, I’ve had different interests wax and wane in intensity. There was the time I fancied myself an artist; the time my primary focus was on winning races or football matches; my baking obsession during lockdown; the list continues. Only two fascinations have remained fervent throughout my life, however, those being music and writing.
Of course, the music my parents had on their iPods provided the bedrock of my foray into the art form: Madness, ABBA, Daft Punk and co. injecting life into many a tedious car journey. Once I became old enough to navigate the Internet and streaming services, I found that the opportunities for musical discovery became boundless. Thus began a curiosity-fuelled excavation that saw my attention bounce, pinball-style, from rock to classical, country to hyperpop, to anything labelled ‘experimental.’ And there’s writing, which has been my primary form of self-expression for as long as I can remember,
Having underlined these fixations, I have to wonder why it took me up until late 2022 to combine them. I mean, there I was, encountering pioneer after pioneer, feeling moved by compositions to a degree I had never before experienced, and yet, still, I neglected to verbalise the way that chord sent a shiver down my spine, or how the way they sang that lyric left me in pieces.
To me, what Zappa is reflecting through his (typically provocative) comment is the view that rock journalism – and music journalism more broadly – is pointless. Why trawl the thesaurus in a desperate attempt to explain what is inexplicable? Why scramble to interpret songs when your conclusions are probably wholly inaccurate? Why run the risk of diluting something in trying to make sense of it?
These questions used to plague me. Now, I reject them.
What joy is joy unshared? Praise, unsung, criticism undivulged? Moreover, considering Geordie Greep’s description of music as ‘the most accessible art form, and the most mysterious’ in a recent interview, what harm could possibly come from someone who is passionate about music attempting to put into words the effect a song or record had on them? Yes, people will inevitably encounter disagreement in making their opinion of a piece of music known; this is particularly evident in the digital age in which we live. But it is this very discourse that encapsulates the beauty of music, in that a song can be despised by one person and adored by another.
Music journalism, at its core, exists to promote discussion, which I believe is essential for a music scene to thrive. I’m not sure it needs a purpose to justify its existence in the first place, though: to me, just the act of articulating what many may believe to be impossible or pointless to try to is enough of a reason for music journalism to continue. And if somebody – even just one person – feels compelled to experience a song or album for themselves after reading my ramblings about it?
That’s good enough for me.
3rd Place winner: Ceinwen Haydon
The Sisters of Mercy
After Leonard Cohen
live in each leaf that turns
in autumn, each kiss on the brow
of the sick. They flourish in
brothels and backstreets. Gentle
pressure of fingers, skin on skin
is theirs. Their warmth chases away
ice-draughts from gods and their acolytes.
They embrace the abandoned, the decaying,
the lost and the hopeless; they love
all those whose sore and unwashed skin
taints the breeze. They brush aside
ashes of sulphur from lives lived in hell.
The Sisters of Mercy they are—
not departed or gone.
PRIZES:
All winners (1st, 2nd and 3rd prizes) will receive free entry to the award event at the Innside Hotel, Manchester on Sunday 17th November, 2024.
The winning entry will:
As part of their prize, the winner will receive 2 x full Festival Weekend Pass (worth over £150).
- be published on the prestigious rock journalism website ‘Louder Than War’
- be published on the Louder Than Words website
- be published by Northern Gravy
- receive an enviable collection of music books
* accurate at the time of advertising
The 2nd and 3rd prize winners will:
As part of their prize, the 2nd and 3rd prize winners will each receive 2 x Sunday Passes (worth over £60).
- Receive a number of music books
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The winner and all short-listed entrants of the competition will be announced by Wednesday, 6th November 2024.
Acceptance of the prize and/or attendance at the Award event must be received in writing to admin@louderthanwordsfest.com by midnight Friday 8th November 2024, after which the prize will be awarded to the next winner in line.
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Rising to the challenge theme: Writing on Music – the future’s rosy! Amy’s winning piece is an abstract focused on Patti Smith’s M Train, discussing the music memoir as a literary text.
Patti Smith’s M Train and the music memoir as a literary text.
An autobiography is a chronological retelling of one’s own life; a memoir focuses on a specific period or theme in a person’s life and thoroughly explores it. Sidonie Smith in Reading Autobiography argues: ‘memoir writing exposes how autobiographical acts take place at cultural sites where discourses intersect, conflict, and compete with one another, as narrators are pulled and tugged into complex and contradictory self-positionings through a performative dialogism’ (Smith, 1987, p.165). A memoir has the freedom to explore a ‘cultural site’ in further detail by using fictional elements to exploit the contradicting and complex thoughts of the writer. Writing one’s own memoir rather than having another author write the text gives the musician control over their own story and allows them to reshape the myths surrounding their careers. Patti Smith in her memoirs Just Kids and M Train reasserts her voice in the mythological version of herself created by pop culture. Just Kids concentrates mostly on one particular period in Smith’s life – her time living with Robert Mapplethorpe in the 1960s and 1970s – whereas M Train spans over a longer period as it focuses on moments past and present rather than one particular memory. Patti Smith’s punk poetry and music are confessional, disjointed works of art and her memoirs reflect that artistry too. The punk aesthetic, discussed by Dick Hebdige in his book Subculture: The Meaning of Style, is a fragmented image represented by safety pins which is reminiscent of Claude Levi-Strauss’ bricolage. M Train weaves fiction and reality together and deals with the loss of her husband Fred ‘Sonic’ Smith in a nonlinear narrative, which is anchored by coffee shops and the words of artists Smith admires. Smith incorporates photographs, dreams, and television into the memoir to explain feelings and emotions surrounding grief. The unconventional narrative structure is reminiscent of punk, yet it also represents the fragmented pieces of Smith’s identity. She is not just a punk icon; she is a mother, partner, wanderer, to name a few of her alter egos. Ultimately, the music memoir highlights the complex identity of a musician and is an extension to Strauss’ bricolage and, like punk, is a revolutionary act.
Many thanks to our Wilko Johnson Writing Award sponsors Rock’s Backpages and Bloomsbury Press for the fabulous prizes – the future’s bright, the future’s rosy!
Amy McCarthy is a writer and bookseller living in Sheffield. She has recently completed her MA in English Literature from the University of Sheffield and received her BA in English Literature from York St John University in 2017. Her Masters dissertation was on the female body in female rock musicians’ memoirs. She also writes book and music reviews for her personal blog behindthecritic.
Martha Boyd is a UEA English Literature & Creative Writing graduate. In 2016 she trudged through the Heidelberg snow to present her story ‘Rabbit Holes’ but, as a fervent gig goer, she is pleased to be back living near her favourite venue – the Brudenell Social Club – in Leeds. For Martha, music matters – a character in her HG Wells Prize nominated story ‘Disaster’ considers Bob Dylan a cure for both heartbreak and missiles. A piece from her collection of Bowie-themed poems was recently included in the anthology ‘Underline’.
Imogen Bebb is 19 years old and a Music Performance student at Kidderminster College. She has written about music for various publications from a young age, and currently runs her own blog called ‘The Sound Of The Crowd’. Her favourite bands are OMD, XTC and 10cc, and in her spare time she can usually be found attending gigs or spending too much money in record shops!